11. 6 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Directions: Answer the question using complete sentences.
Question: Do you think that your happiness lies within you?
I think one of the things that demermines my happiness is within me. Because having positive attitude makes the bad situation certainly better. However, I also think there's limitation to have positive attitude. If we are in a very worse situation like losing our lovers or starving and so on, normal people can't have positive attitude. So, I think my situation and my inner attitude is both very important to be happy.
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I think one of the things that demermines my happiness is within me.
>> I think one of the things that determines my happiness is I myself.
Because having positive attitude makes the bad situation certainly better.
>> Because having a positive attitude makes the bad situation certainly becomes better.
However, I also think there\'s limitation to have positive attitude.
>> However, I also think that there\'s a limitation to having a positive attitude.
If we are in a very worse situation like losing our lovers or starving and so, normal people can\'t have positive attitude.
>> If we are in a very worse situation like losing our lovers or starving and so on then we can\'t normally have a positive attitude.
So, I think my situation and my inner attitude is both very important to be happy.
>> So, I think my situation and my inner attitude are both very important to be happy.
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