11/6 homework
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Hi [이름]! Thank you for accomplishing your homework despite your very busy schedule this week. I appreciate it! ^ ^
You gave a very good point. When it comes to having a lot of tasks, what better way to handle them is to manage your time well and of course to have focus. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
This is good question to me in this week.
>>This is a very timely question for me especially for this week.
I have so many task on this week.
>>I have so many tasks this week.
I don\'t know exact solution, but in my case, I separate my time in minute scale.
>>I don\'t know the exact solution for it, but in my case, I manage my time in a minute scale.
And, at that time, I think most important thing is a peace of mindset.
>>And, I set my mind into focusing the most important task to accomplish first.
If I feel it is very stressful, I can not finish well.
>>If I feel so stressed, I can not finish my tasks well.
So, I just make calm by myself, I listen piano music with work.
>>So, I try to calm myself by listening to some piano music while working.
But, even if I can control my mindset very well, after finish all task, I need to take a rest very well on weekend.
>>But even though I\'m focused and finished all my tasks, I still feel the need to have a very good rest on the weekend.
Sometimes, I think \'busy\' is better than \'boring\', and the society require me still, \"I am very nice person\" like this.
>>Sometimes, I think \'busy\' is better than \'boring\', and society requires me to still be nice despite being very busy.
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