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Nowadays many Korean music and singers are very famous in the world. I am proud of them. I like popular music of Korea. Ballad is my favorite type of music. It makes me comfortable and clam. My favorite singer is Mariah Carey. I like that musician because she sings with so much emotion. She has a very becautiful voice. I think she is a very talented artist.

Hello [이름]!   You really make me proud because you almost got perfect. Some reminders: 1. Use much if the noun is non-countable (e.g., water, sand). Use many if the noun is countable (e.g., oranges, children) 2. Check your spelling.   Teacher Venus^^   Nowadays many Korean music and singers are very famous in the world. >>>Nowadays many Korean songs and singers are very famous in the world. I am proud of them. >>>CORRECT I like popular music of Korea. >>>better: I like popular Korean music.   Ballad is my favorite type of music. >>>CORRECT It makes me comfortable and clam. >>>It makes me comfortable and calm. My favorite singer is Mariah Carey.>>>CORRECT   I like that musician because she sings with so much emotion. >>>CORRECT She has a very becautiful voice. >>>She has a very beautiful voice. I think she is a very talented artist. >>>CORRECT