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Ballad is my favorite type of music. I first became interested in this type of music when I saw a performance on TV. Also I liked many singers of ballad. It makes me comfortable and clam. I usually listen to music when I go to the bed. It makes me comfortable and clam.

Hello [이름]!   It\'s great that you added more information about the topic. Some reminders: 1. Make sure if you want to use the \'present tense\' or the \'past tense\'. 2. Check your spelling.   Teacher Venus^^   Ballad is my favorite type of music. >>>CORRECT I first became interested in this type of music when I saw a performance on TV. >>>CORRECT Also I liked many singers of ballad. >>>did you mean: Also I like many ballad singers. It makes me comfortable and clam. >>>It makes me comfortable and calm. I usually listen to music when I go to the bed. >>>CORRECT