#11

2016-09-10 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Are you a happy person? Yes, i'm happy person. 2. What is happiness for you? Just If too hard to it's happy. 3. What do you think is the color for happiness? I think a happy color is rainbow color. 4. What makes you feel happy? My friends make me happy...^^ 5. How can you become happy again when you are sad? I can cry.

강사 첨삭

[이름]! I know you are a happy person! I can see that in your eyes! kikiki I hope you will not change your attitude of being happy and positive all the time... And, ooohh your sentence construction today is pretty good huh! Just please take note of the corrections below.. I\'ll see you in our class! Hugs and kisses my dear!

~~ Teacher Lisa

1. Are you a happy person?
Yes, i\'m happy person.
>>> Yes, I am a happy person.

2. What is happiness for you?
Just If too hard to it\'s happy.
>>> YOU MEAN: Being happy is not that hard.

3. What do you think is the color for happiness?
I think a happy color is rainbow color.
>>> I think a happy color would be the rainbow colors.

4. What makes you feel happy?
My friends make me happy...^^
>>> My friends are the one who makes me happy... ^^

5. How can you become happy again when you are sad?
I can cry.
>>> I started crying.. ^^

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