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Hi there Ms. [이름],
I agree with you but I think many people will protest if this happens. Anyway, smoking is a very old vice or habit so it\'s really hard to break or stop. But I guess you still have to help your husband to stop it for health reasons not only for himself but for you and your daughters too since you could also get sick because of second-hand smoke. See you tomorrow!
Take care!
T. Lynn
I really agree it.
>> I totally agree to this!
My husband likes smoking.
>> correct!
OR>> My husband smokes.
So my children and I always tell him. “You should not it for yourself. We worry about you because of smoking.”
>> So my children and I always tell him to do it for himslef because we worry about his health.
However he still wants smoking.
>> However, he still smoke.
I think smoking must be banned by law.
>> correct!
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