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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Good to see you back! I hope you are fully healed. Thank you for making your homework. You are a responsible student. See you in class later!
Take Care!
~T. Lynn
My co-worker is very a good man because he is helping for the needy with his friends.
>>My co-worker is a very good man because he is helping the needy with his friends.
OR>> My co-worker is a good man because helps the needy together with his friends.
A few years ago, he decided to hold a one-day concert with his friends.
>> correct!
So I bought tickets and I attended the concert with my family.
>> correct!
There were many famous singers and many good people.
>> correct!
All the proceeds of the concert used for the poor.
>> All the proceeds of the concert was used to help the poor.
I am proud of my co-worker.
>> correct!
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