11/7 homework

2018-11-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

[What would you do if your best friend or someone close to you stole something from you?] This is too sad imagination. I have never had such an experience fortunately. But, If I have the experience, I will pretend I don't know it once. But, unfortunately, after then, if it will occurred again, I think I should ask to her or him about the reason. If she have something reason, I can help her. But, there is no suitable reason, I can not maintain the relationship. However, I think if she think about me exactly best friend, it will not occurred between us.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework! You are an amazing person and a student! Despite your busy schedule for tomorrow, you still did your homework! Kudos! ^ ^ Your thoughts are awesome by the way! ^ ^ It is really hard to think that someone close to you would do such a thing. But I hope this situation would never happen to you. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah



This is too sad imagination.

>>This is a sad thing to imagine.
I have never had such an experience fortunately.

>>Fortunately, I never had such an experience.
But, If I have the experience, I will pretend I don\'t know it once.

>>But, If I would have such an experience, I will pretend I didn\'t know about it.
But, unfortunately, after then, if it will occurred again, I think I should ask to her or him about the reason.

>>But, unfortunately, if it will happen again, I think I should ask to her or him about the reason. 
If she have something reason, I can help her.

>>If she has a reason for doing so, I would try to help her.
But, there is no suitable reason, I can not maintain the relationship.

>>But if there is no acceptable reason, I can not maintain a good relationship any longer.
However, I think if she think about me exactly best friend, it will not occurred between us.

>>However, if she thinks of me as her best friend, it will not occur between us.

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