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2016-12-21 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

I have to think studying English again. Because these days I am very lazy because of weather. I hate winter season. However I decied keeping study English.

강사 첨삭


Hello, Ms. [이름]!

There are times we feel really tired and bored. But we mustn\'t give up. Giving up means surrendering. Meaning, you lose and the other side wins. Will you let them win? Of course not! You\'d like to win, right?

Take care!

~T. Lynn

I have to think studying English again.

>> I have to think about studying English again.
 Because these days I am very lazy because of weather.

>>Because these days, I am very lazy because of the weather.
 I hate winter season.

>> correct!
 However I decied keeping study English.

>> However, I\'ve decided to keep studying English.

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