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If my house is on fire, I must save my family.
If my house in on fire when I stay alone, I will take my smart phone with me.
Because my smart phone has many funtion with my personal imformation.
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Hello, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for making time to write your compositions. I truly appreciate it! Good job!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
If my house is on fire, I must save my family.
>> correct!
If my house in on fire when I stay alone, I will take my smart phone with me.
>>If my house in on fire while I \'m alone, I will take my smart phone with me.
Because my smart phone has many funtion with my personal imformation.
>> Because my smart phone has many functions with my personal information.
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