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학생이 쓴 원문
I really want to live in city.
Because it is very comfortable to live in.
There are many subway stations, cafes, big hospitals and many more.
So I want to move there but it is not easy because of cost.
Apartments of city are very expensive.
Also my office is located near countryside.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [이름]!
I think you mentioned before that you are planning to live in the city when Chanmi will go to high school. Well, that will be just two years from now, right?
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I really want to live in city.
>>I really want to live in the/a city.
Because it is very comfortable to live in.
>> Because it\'s very comfortable to live there.
There are many subway stations, cafes, big hospitals and many more.
>> correct!
So I want to move there but it is not easy because of cost.
>> So I want to move there but it is not easy because of the cost of living.
Apartments of city are very expensive.
>> apartments in the city are very expensive.
Also my office is located near countryside.
>> Also my office is located near the countryside.
>>I really want to live in the/a city.
Because it is very comfortable to live in.
>> Because it\'s very comfortable to live there.
There are many subway stations, cafes, big hospitals and many more.
>> correct!
So I want to move there but it is not easy because of cost.
>> So I want to move there but it is not easy because of the cost of living.
Apartments of city are very expensive.
>> apartments in the city are very expensive.
Also my office is located near countryside.
>> Also my office is located near the countryside.
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