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I want to be a thin like fashion models.
But it is very difficult.
I sometimes think that my life is one times.
There are a lot of delicous foods in my life.
So before I die, I want to eat them.
I also want to wear a lot of becautiful clothes before I die.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]!(\",)
Well, we can\'t be as slim as fashion models but we can enjoy eating unlike them who are always in a diet. So here\'s to us, cheers and enjoy your lunch!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I want to be a thin like fashion models.
>> I want to be thin like fashion models.
But it is very difficult.
>> correct!
I sometimes think that my life is one times.
>> I sometimes think that I have only one life.
There are a lot of delicous foods in my life.
>> correct!
So before I die, I want to eat them.
>> correct!
I also want to wear a lot of becautiful clothes before I die.
>> correct!
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