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2017-09-18 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello. I think I am a diligent woman during the week. But while I spend weekend, I become very lazy. I only do household chores. I always regret. Today too.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]!

Ah. Ms. [이름] you know what, one important thing that I\'ve learned is that the word \"regret\" should not be in our vocabulary (life vocabulary I mean). So please, make the best out of it. Not only for today, but always and as much as we can. I always tell you this right? Yes, in our life, we will have regrets, but if we can lessen these regrets then why not? The most frightening thing is not that we are going to die, it\'s having regrets that we didn\'t do a thing before dying. ^^

Let\'s talk about this tomorrow okay. Have a great day and take care!

~Teacher Rain~

I think I am a diligent woman during the week.

>> I think I became a diligent woman last week.
 But while I spend weekend, I become very lazy.

>> While I spent my weekend, I became very lazy.
 I only do household chores.

>> I only finished my house chores.
 I always regret. Today too.

>>DID YOU MEAN: So I always regret about how I spend my weekends.

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