11. 8. Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Directions: Answer the question using complete sentences not more than 8.
Question: What is your biggest goal in life?
My biggest goal in my life is to become a good teacher. Just being a teacher is maybe not so diffecult. But being a good teacher demands more effort. For example, I should try to be interested in all kinds of fields even if I feel boring at some. Because students have all different interests and talents, I can't stop studying. Loving others makes me happy and I will love my students in my way as a teacher.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, [이름]!!:)
How are you doing today?
Happy Thursday to you!!^-^
God job in doing your homework.
I believe that you will be a good teacher.
The greatest elementary teacher!!^_^
I will talk to you tomorrow.
~T. Lorna^_^
My biggest goal in my life is to become a good teacher.
>> My biggest goal in life is to become a good teacher.
Just being a teacher is maybe not so diffecult.
>> Being a teacher might not be so difficult.
But being a good teacher demands more effort.
>> Correct!
For example, I should try to be interested in all kinds of fields even if I feel boring at some.
>> As a teacher, I should be be interested in all kinds of fields even if I feel boring at some.
Because students have all different interests and talents, I can\'t stop studying.
>> Students have different interests and talents so I shouldn\'t stop studying.
Loving others makes me happy and I will love my students in my way as a teacher.
>> Correct! (A loving teacher is a greatest teacher!!^_^)
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