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학생이 쓴 원문
I am a part of the marketing department with members.
I am a manager in my team.
I am in charge of the export, collecting data and writing reports for my team.
When my co-workers have some problems, I write reports instead of them.
It was my first job and I want to work for a long time here.
I like my job.
강사 첨삭
I am a part of the marketing department with members.
>> I am a part of a marketing department.
I am a manager in my team.
>> Correct
I am in charge of the export, collecting data and writing reports for my team.
>> Correct
or
>> I am in-charge of export, data collection and writing reports for my team.
When my co-workers have some problems, I write reports instead of them.
>> When my co-workers /team members face a problem, I write the reports instead of them.
It was my first job and I want to work for a long time here.
>> It was my first job and I want to here for a long time.
I like my job.
>> Correct
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