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I never want to have someting because when I was young, I was very poor so I learned to save money.
So I don't waste money.
If I could get one gift.. I want to have a new modern apartment in my family.
강사 첨삭
I never want to have someting because when I was young, I was very poor so I learned to save money.
>> Correct
So I don\'t waste money.
>> Correct
If I could get one gift.. I want to have a new modern apartment in my family.
>>If I could get one gift, I want to have a new modern apartment for my family.
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