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학생이 쓴 원문
When I was young, I believed it that there is another life after the life I have now.
But now I don\'t believe.
The present is important more than after life.
So I will live very hard in the present.
강사 첨삭
When I was young, I believed it that there is another life after the life I have now.
>> When I was young, I believed that there is another life after this life I have now.
But now I don\'t believe.
>> But now, I don\'t believe it.
The present is important more than after life.
>> This present life is more important than after life.
So I will live very hard in the present.
>> Correct
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