11.Dec
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
I believe it is serious society problem at all age not only for teens.
I think it occur from some other social problems such as below examples.
1. Nowadays, we can easily get some information for crime or suicide through the internet.
2. The movies are getting more aggressive. I think they watch that kind of movie an adolescent period, it makes wrong attitude and values of their life.
3. The parents is very busy. That means that they less care of their child and the child has many time by alone. Therefore, the child cannot get a chance to define one’s upright view of life
As a those reasons, some teens easily give their life up without striving because renunciation is most easy method to solve the problem.
Thus, we need to give much love and concern for our children.
I believe it is a serious problem in the society at all ages, but not just teens.
I think this happens because of social problems such as the following:
1. Nowadays, we can easily get some information about crimes and suicides through the internet.
2. The movies are getting more aggressive/violent. I think when they watch that kind of movies when going through adolescent period, it could create misbehaviors and misconducts in their lives.
3. Their parents are very busy, That means that they care less, and often neglect their children. As a result, the child will have a time alone. Therefore, the child cannot get a chance to define one\'s upright views of life.
Some teens easily give their life up without striving because renunciation is most easy method to solve the problem.
Thus, we need to give much love and concern for our children.
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