11/may

ESSAY: ANSWER IN FIVE [5] SENTENCES ONLY: Why do you think many Chinese tourist are coming to Korea? They are coming for shopping. The quality of the clothes are much better than theirs and more trendy. China is about 10 years behind in current trend. I'm not a cultural nationalist at all, but It's true since there are cases proved by many aspects. Of course, they have grown rapidly as much as Korean and Japanese feel scary. But they need to learn alot in many ways from which the nations have developed before them.

Hi [이름]! Thanks for sending this in. Please go over my corrections if you have time. ~Kelly^^ ESSAY: ANSWER IN FIVE [5] SENTENCES ONLY:Why do you think many Chinese tourist are coming to Korea?They are coming for shopping. >> Correct. >> They are coming to Korea for shopping. The quality of the clothes are much better than theirs and more trendy. >> The quality of the clothes are much better than theirs and are more trendy. China is about 10 years behind in current trend. >> Correct. I\'m not a cultural nationalist at all, but It\'s true since there are cases proved by many aspects. >> I\'m not a cultural nationalist at all, but it\'s true since there were cases proven in many aspects. Of course, they have grown rapidly as much as Korean and Japanese feel scary. >> Of course, they have grown rapidly that is why Koreans and Japanese feel scared about it. But they need to learn a lot in many ways from which the nations have developed before them. >> Correct.