11 Sep. Homework

Homework theme : If you won the lottery, would you quit your job? What would you spend the money on? My opinion : If i won the lottery, i would quit my job and apply to famous university for taking a MBA couse. So, Thougtout learning a knowledge of economic, i will fing out how can i run the huge money and how i spend the mony for me, my family and society. But... Actually... When i feel depressed, i sometime buy a lottery for escaping my devastating situatio but always lose the lottery. so i think that it is better to save the money not purchasing the lottery.

Hi! Good job on your essay! I can see that you have put a lot of thought in it.

I just like to remind you of your typographical errors so that you may avoid misspelled words.

It is very nice that you already know how to spend your money, if in case you win the lottery!

I hope you will win someday and I hope you won\'t forget to share it with us! Kidding! Anyway, good job! Keep it up! :)

Homework theme
: If you won the lottery, would you quit your job?
What would you spend the money on?
My opinion
: If i won the lottery, i would quit my job and apply to famous university for taking a MBA couse.

>If I win the lottery, I would quit my job, apply in a well known University and take up an MBA course.

 So, Thougtout learning a knowledge of economic, i will fing out how can i run the huge money and how i spend the mony for me, my family and society

>Since I have a handful of knowledge in economics, I am acquainted with how I am going to invest and spend the huge amount of money that I have, considering myself, the needs of my family and the status of our society.^^ 

 But... Actually ... When i feel depressed, i sometime buy a lottery for escaping my devastating situatio but always lose the lottery.

>Sometimes, I buy a lottery ticket especially when I am depressed. I find this as a way for me to escape my devastating situation but unfortunately, I have never won the lottery. 

 So i think that it is better to save the money not purchasing the lottery.

>This made me realize that it is better to save money rather than to buy a lottery ticket.^^