110. Homework

We\'re the same! When I was young, I did not like to make plans, because I believe spontaneity was better!

Years after, I realized I wasted too much time, money, and effort believe that illogical idea!

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ESSAY: You probably have plans for your life- school, a career, travel and adventure, a family. But what happens if any of those plans get ruined?
>>CORRECT!
When I was young, I didn’t want to make plans because I already knew I would get a lot of stress to follow my plans.

>>When I was young, I didn’t want to make plans because I already knew I would get a lot of stress if I followed my plans.

However, someday, I have realized that making plans and following these were more important than getting stress.

>>However, someday, I have realized that making plans and following these were more important than getting stressed.
That’s because though I might get burden, at least I will get achievements what I wanted.
>>That’s because though I might get burdened, at least I will get the achievements that I wanted.
Furthermore, I know that following the first plan is that most of times aren’t easy and can be ruined easily.

>>Furthermore, I know that following the first plan most of the time isn\'t easy and can be ruined easily.

But, I often to make other plans at least second and third plans while I plan.

>>But, I often to make other plans such as second and third plans while doing it.

Moreover, I am a person who forgets bad memory easily and try to think positive.
>>Moreover, I am a person who forgets bad memory easily and try to think positive.
For example, I wasn’t promoted last month, and it was not the same that they promised me before I contracted with them last month.

>>For example, I wasn’t promoted last month, and it was not the same as what they promised me before I contracted with them last month.

However, I didn’t complain to the other person about it because, at that time, my direct boss went to Malaysia for a contract which I need to be work so I couldn’t find someone whom could answer my questions.

>>However, I didn’t complain to the other person about it because, at that time, my immediate boss went to Malaysia for a contract which I needed to be working for, so I couldn’t find someone who could answer my questions.

Furthermore, I already felt that there were some complicated reasons that I was able to guess.

>>CORRECT!

 As my direct boss as got to the office, he wanted to solve this problem with the executives, and suggested me another way instead of promotion.

>> As my immediate boss got to the office, he wanted to solve this problem with the executives, and suggested  another way instead of promotion.

Thus, I just asked him pay English tutor of mine, that\'s my second plan after I didn\'t get a promotion, it because I spend it monthly.

>>Thus, I just asked him pay to pay my English tutor, that\'s my second plan after not getting a promotion, it\'s because I spend on it monthly.

But he said it is only given to the executives, so he would recommend my salary increased instead of paying that.

>>But he said it is only given to the executives, so he recommended that my salary increase instead of paying that.

In fact, I wanted to be promoted since I was eager to earn more, but after deal, it was not too much important owing to the increased salary.

>>In fact, I wanted to be promoted since I was eager to earn more, but after the deal, it was not too important owing to the increased salary.

Hence, I just got an achievement what I wanted.
>>Hence, I just got the achievement that I wanted.
Anyways, if I meet a situation that is not my plan which I wouldn’t expect, then I will make a follow up plan and catch up my ruined previous plan.

>>Anyways, if I meet a situation that is not according to my plan, then I will make a follow-up plan and catch up with my ruined previous plan.

I think it’s better try to do something instead of spending for complaining and hesitating.

>>I think it’s better try to do something instead of spending time complaining and hesitating.