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Hi [이름]! Thank you for taking the time in doing your homework. You\'re very well appreciated. ^ ^
You are not yet a parent, but I guess you will make a very good one someday! ^ ^ You gave awesome answers on this one, and I totally agree with you. Giving kids certain tasks and responsibility is a good thing. Chores help kids learn responsibility and self-reliance. Assigning children regular chores helps teach them responsibility. Tasks that personally affect kids, such as cleaning their room or doing their own laundry, can help them become more self-reliant at the same time. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
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Because they will be able to feel the way how their parents do.
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And they can feel they are in their family.
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But I think giving them hard works is not a good idea.
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>>But I think giving them difficult tasks is not a good idea.
It can make them tired so they don\'t want to do chores and tasks anymore.
>>It would make them feel tired so they wouldn\'t want to do chores anymore.
I think at first, simple chores like cleaning their toys would be better.
>>I think at first, simple chores like cleaning their toys would be good.
It will be good if thet feel the chores and tasks are a play.
>>It would be nice if they feel that doing chores is like playing.
I haven\'t been parents ever, I guess it is vert hard.
>>I am not a parent, so I guess this is hard.
In my case, my parents was tired because I didn\'t really want to do any tasks at home.
>>In my case, my parents were always tired because I didn\'t really want to do any tasks at home.
I thought it\'s enough because I have homeworks.
>>I thought I don\'t need to do any chores because I have a lot of homework. (homework is a non countable noun so no \"s\")
It\'s different depending on childeren\'s character.
>>It\'s different depending on a child\'s character.
So I think parents should think about this task a lot.
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>>I think parents should give this a lot of thought.
P.S. I understand now what you meant with \"speciality\". It means people always want to be different or be apart from the rest. I guess a better word would be \"distinctiveness\". I hope this is what you mean again! ^^
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