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2018-11-02 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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I think giving their children certain chores or tasks is good. Because they will be able to feel the way how their parents do. And they can feel they are in their family. But I think giving them hard works is not a good idea. It can make them tired so they don\'t want to do chores and tasks anymore. I think at first, simple chores like cleaning their toys would be better. It will be good if thet feel the chores and tasks are a play. I haven\'t been parents ever, I guess it is vert hard. In my case, my parents was tired because I didn\'t really want to do any tasks at home. I thought it\'s enough because I have homeworks. It\'s different depending on childeren\'s character. So I think parents should think about this task a lot. PS. Happy FRIDAY!^^ You wondered the word \"speciality\" on yesterday\'s feedback. I guess if we can do anything, we want to be special. So if everyone can be rich, someone want to get attention so they may want to be poor. I hope it\'s clear.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for taking the time in doing your homework. You\'re very well appreciated. ^ ^

You are not yet a parent, but I guess you will make a very good one someday! ^ ^ You gave awesome answers on this one, and I totally agree with you. Giving kids certain tasks and responsibility is a good thing.  Chores help kids learn responsibility and self-reliance. Assigning children regular chores helps teach them responsibility. Tasks that personally affect kids, such as cleaning their room or doing their own laundry, can help them become more self-reliant at the same time. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah


I think giving their children certain chores or tasks is good.

>>Correct

Because they will be able to feel the way how their parents do.

>>Correct 

And they can feel they are in their family.

>>Correct 

But I think giving them hard works is not a good idea.

>>Correct or

>>But I think giving them difficult tasks is not a good idea.

It can make them tired so they don\'t want to do chores and tasks anymore.

>>It would make them feel tired so they wouldn\'t want to do chores anymore. 

I think at first, simple chores like cleaning their toys would be better.

>>I think at first, simple chores like cleaning their toys would be good.

It will be good if thet feel the chores and tasks are a play.

>>It would be nice if they feel that doing chores is like playing.

I haven\'t been parents ever, I guess it is vert hard.

>>I am not a parent, so I guess this is hard.

In my case, my parents was tired because I didn\'t really want to do any tasks at home.

>>In my case, my parents were always tired because I didn\'t really want to do any tasks at home. 

I thought it\'s enough because I have homeworks.

>>I thought I don\'t need to do any chores because I have a lot of homework. (homework is a non countable noun so no \"s\")

It\'s different depending on childeren\'s character.

>>It\'s different depending on a child\'s character.

So I think parents should think about this task a lot.

>>Correct or

>>I think parents should give this a lot of thought. 


P.S. I understand now what you meant with \"speciality\". It means people always want to be different or be apart from the rest. I guess a better word would be \"distinctiveness\". I hope this is what you mean again! ^^

Anyway, I would also like to encourage you to check our website for our Halloween Mask contest. Try to guess which one is teacher and vote for that number. I hope you will guess me right! ^ ^  

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