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Q : How important do you think it is to public transportation?
A : To using public trasportation is very important.
Because if we use it, we can reduce traffic jams, environmental pollution and save time. The most important things is environment.
I know that diesel cars cannot drive in Beijing.
In Korea, there are many families have two cars.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! I appreciate your answer. It seems that Korea is very concerned about their environment. Keep that up!
I hope that Philippines will also do the same.
~~May~~
To using public transportation is very important.Because if we use it, we can reduce traffic jams, environmental pollution and save time.
>> Public transportation is very important because we can reduce traffic jams, environmental pollution and we can also save time.
The most important things is environment.
>> The most important thing to consider is our environment.
I know that diesel cars cannot drive in Beijing.
I know that diesel cars cannot drive in Beijing.
>> I know that diesel cars cannot be driven in Beijing.
In Korea, there are many families have two cars.
In Korea, there are many families have two cars.
>> In Korea, many families own two cars.
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