[1105]home work
학생이 쓴 원문
Q : What are some ways you feel you can make a difference in this world?
A : The question is very difficult. but i can do it.
I don't have the ability to make a difference in this world.
But i don't change by myself, i can't try it. We should have a vision and must be make a differencd in my mind to the future.
Positive thinking is one of the ways to change the world.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon [이름]! You are right. You yourself cannot change the world, but we all can make a difference if we unite.
I believe that you always think positively. Talk to you again tomorrow! ^^
~~May~~
The question is very difficult. but i can do it.>> The question is very difficult to answer, but I can do it.
I don\'t have the ability to make a difference in this world.
I don\'t have the ability to make a difference in this world.
>> CORRECT GRAMMAR
But i don\'t change by myself, i can\'t try it. We should have a vision and must be make a differencd in my mind to the future.
But i don\'t change by myself, i can\'t try it. We should have a vision and must be make a differencd in my mind to the future.
>> I can\'t change the world only by myself. We should have a vision in life and try to make a difference for our future.
Positive thinking is one of the ways to change the world.
Positive thinking is one of the ways to change the world.
>> Optimism is one of the keys that can change the world.
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