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You gave good points here, but I was a little confused with some sentences. Well, for me, the best way to accomplish a lot of tasks is knowing how to manage your time well. Like what you have said, prioritizing the most important tasks and accomplishing it with urgency is helpful. But of course, I don\'t agree with procrastination or delaying in accomplishing tasks, unless there is no urgency to do it. ^ ^
>>Correct (sentence is correct if we are talking about planning or making a plan.)
>>To be honest, I\'m not so good with managing my time when it comes to accomplishing tasks. (since we are talking about managing a lot of things, this sentence would be better ^ ^)
But I have some rules to manage my days.
>>Correct
I want to recommend this way to whom is very busy.
>>I would like to recommend it to those who are very busy.
The first one is doing the most important one that I have to do it right now.
>>The first thing to do is to put one\'s attention to the most important task.
If I have a deadline, I\'m so nervous because I should do it during limited time.
>>If I have a deadline, I get so nervous because of trying and wanting to accomplish it in a limited time.
So making my priority plan is important.
>>Correct or
>>So prioritizing the things I need to accomplish is important.
And I\'d like to recommend to do some works by turns. (I\'m not sure that meaning makes sense)
>>And I\'d also like to recommend to do your tasks by turns. (I hope this is what you mean)
It could be boring if you do only one work.
>>It could be boring if you do your tasks one at a time.
So if you feel it\'s boring, you\'d better do the other thing.
>>So if you feel bored with one task, you can do another thing and get back to the previous task after.
If so, you can get powers to manage your works.
>>If you do so, you can regain strength and interest in managing your tasks.
But sometimes it could not be helpful so do it occassionaly.
>>But sometimes, this strategy is not so helpful; so just do it occasionally.
And I used to hate works even if there were many works.
>>I hate doing and accomplishing tasks, even though there are so many of them.
If so, delay your plans! It\'s not a good habit but I think sometimes do it is bot bad.
>>If so, delay your tasks! It\'s not a good habit but I think sometimes it\'s also nice to put them off; for a while! (if there is no urgency in accomplishing a certain tasks, then, maybe delaying them a little while wouldn\'t hurt)
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