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This is a very sad situation in case it happens. Trust is very important especially to loved ones and friends. But if they do something to ruin the relationship, it would be hard to mend it. I hope it would never happen to us. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I think that situation will never be happen to me.
>>I think this situation will never happen to me.
But if it happen, I will ask the reason why they stole my stuff.
>>But, if it happens, I will ask the reason for them stealing my stuff.
I trust whole my freinds.
>>I trust all of my friends.
If they stole something from me, there will be some reasons.
>>If they steal something from me, there must be some reasons.
But I think it\'s a serious criminal so I will be disappointed.
>>But, I think it\'s a serious crime, so I will be disappointed.
I think if they stole my stuff, I will be confused because my friend is precious but it\'s an obvious criminal.
>>I think if they steal my stuff, which is obviously a crime, I will be confused because my friends are precious to me.
But if I think there is a proper excuse, I would like to ignore her or his mistake.
>>But if I think there is an acceptable reason, I would like to ignore her or his mistake.
If it\'s the reason that they don\'t have enough money, I\'ll be willing to give them some money.
>>If their reason is because they didn\'t have money, I\'ll be willing to give or lend them some money.
Mabey I will make an effort to understand them.
>>Maybe, I will make an effort to understand them.
But if they just did it, I\'ll consider to cut the friendship with that friend.
>>But if they did it without any valid reasons, I\'ll consider ending the friendship.
I hope they won\'t steal my stuff or money.
>>I hope my best friend or any of my close friends wouldn\'t steal my stuff or money.
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