[1107]Hpmework
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How was your day [이름]? I think many people think that the most peaceful place to stay is in the house.
We are the same. I can take a rest and it\'s so comfortable. ^^
~~May~~
The most peaceful place is my house.
>> CORRECT GRAMMAR
The most comfortable space to me in my house is my room
Because when i\'m here, i can sleep well and read a lot book.
>> For me, the most comfortable part of my house is my room because when I stay there, I can sleep well and read a lot of books.
Next time, the second place is coffee shop or libray.
>> The second peaceful place for me is the coffee shop or the library.
I talking with friends at this place releves stress and makes peace.
>> I talk with my friends at this place. It can also help me to relieve stress and have a peaceful mind.
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