1109 homework

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Thank you for sharing your thoughts about this. Typically, in Western culture; it\'s a different thing. Once they reach the age of eighteen, parents would ask their children to leave home and fend for themselves. That means doing odd jobs and asking for student loans just to support themselves. Western parents would say it\'s a way to teach their children independence and of course the value of work. But, I understand it better now how it is in Korea, thanks to you! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

I think perants should support their children financially before they find a job.

>>I think parents need to support their children financially until they find a job.

Because finding job is too hard in Korea.

>>Because finding a job is too hard in Korea. 

Only 2 out of 10 people statistically succeed in finding their job.

>>Only 2 out of 10 people statistically succeed in landing a job. (a lot of people are finding jobs, but only a few are hired or land in a job.)  

The two of them are 80 percent men.(I mean women are more difficult to find a job than most of men.)

>>The two of them are 80 percent men.(I mean women have more difficulty finding a job than most of men.) 

So job seekers in Korea are suffer from financial problem.

>>So job seekers in Korea suffer financial problems.

We should get some licenses about English, computer and our major for job seeking.

>>We need to acquire licenses and certificates to be able to get hired. 

Those examination fees are unaffordable to us.

>>Those examination fees are quite expensive to us.

We can\'t get a loan because we don\'t have a job.

>>Correct

So we need a help from our parents. We have a no choice.

>>We have no choice but to ask help from our parents. 

Some students have to pay off student loans.(We gave student loans for universiry fees)

>>Some students have to pay off student loans.(We ask for student loans for universiry fees) 

So parents\' support is essential for us.

>>Correct

I sometimes sorry for my parents but I can\'t help it.

>>I sometimes feel sorry for my parents but I can\'t help it.