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-This approach seems more realistic to realise the protection of investment liberalization and climate-change mitigation in a short time.
>> This approach seems more realistic in the protection of investment liberalization and climate-change mitigation within a short period of time.
This project aims to study what provisions and chapters are needed to integrate climate-change mitigation into IIAs more specifically.
>> This project specifically aims to study what provisions and chapters are needed to integrate climate-change mitigation into IIAs.
Specifically, this project will define vague conceptual positions in IIAs that might frustrate state’s climate-change measures.
>> This project will define vague conceptual positions in IIAs that might frustrate state’s climate-change measures.
On the basis of this, the project will analyse how states consider those fluctuate positions to protect their policy power when signing a new IIAs or revising the current IIAs.
>> The project will analyse how states consider those fluctuating positions to protect their policy power when signing a new IIAs or revising the current IIAs.
-This approach seems more realistic.
>> Correct
Even though sustainable development regulations have not introduced in IIAs, arbitral tribunals can integrate non-economic values in investment disputes by interpreting the case reasonably.
>> Even though sustainable development regulations have not been introduced in IIAs, arbitral tribunals can integrate non-economic values in investment disputes by reasonably interpreting the case.
-these studies have limitations because they didn’t suggest domestic effors to integrate environmental protection into investment disputes.
>> These studies have limitations because they don’t suggest domestic efforts in integrating environmental protection into investment disputes.
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