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2021-11-15 · 첨삭 강사 Ivy

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-This approach seems more realistic to realise the protection of investment liberalization and climate-change mitigation in a short time. This project aims to study what provisions and chapters are needed to integrate climate-change mitigation into IIAs more specifically. Specifically, this project will define vague conceptual positions in IIAs that might frustrate state’s climate-change measures. On the basis of this, the project will analyse how states consider those fluctuate positions to protect their policy power when signing a new IIAs or revising the current IIAs. -This approach seems more realistic. Even though sustainable development regulations have not introduced in IIAs, arbitral tribunals can integrate non-economic values in investment disputes by interpreting the case reasonably. -these studies have limitations because they didn’t suggest domestic effors to integrate environmental protection into investment disputes.

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Thank you for sending this to me Ye [이름]! -Teacher Ivy

-This approach seems more realistic to realise the protection of investment liberalization and climate-change mitigation in a short time.

>> This approach seems more realistic in the protection of investment liberalization and climate-change mitigation within a short period of time.

This project aims to study what provisions and chapters are needed to integrate climate-change mitigation into IIAs more specifically.

>> This project specifically aims to study what provisions and chapters are needed to integrate climate-change mitigation into IIAs.

 Specifically, this project will define vague conceptual positions in IIAs that might frustrate state’s climate-change measures.

>> This project will define vague conceptual positions in IIAs that might frustrate state’s climate-change measures.

On the basis of this, the project will analyse how states consider those fluctuate positions to protect their policy power when signing a new IIAs or revising the current IIAs.

>> The project will analyse how states consider those fluctuating positions to protect their policy power when signing a new IIAs or revising the current IIAs.
-This approach seems more realistic.

>> Correct

Even though sustainable development regulations have not introduced in IIAs, arbitral tribunals can integrate non-economic values in investment disputes by interpreting the case reasonably.

>> Even though sustainable development regulations have not been introduced in IIAs, arbitral tribunals can integrate non-economic values in investment disputes by reasonably interpreting the case.
-these studies have limitations because they didn’t suggest domestic effors to integrate environmental protection into investment disputes.

>> These studies have limitations because they don’t suggest domestic efforts in integrating environmental protection into investment disputes.

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