1112 HOME WORK

2018-11-14 · 첨삭 강사 May

학생이 쓴 원문

I'm sorry not taking classes. May teacher. Looks an unexpected business trip. Next time, i will take a class very well. Thank you Answer the question briefly. I've heard that in South Korea, the government has been more concerned about their environment. People work together to reduce, reuse, and recycle products. But which is more important, increasing people's standard of living, or protecting the environment? -> Of course, both of these are important. but the important is protecting the enviroment. If the enviroment is destroyed, i think it can't do a better life. And we can't increasing people's standard of living. Now we are suffering from enviromental pollution. Especily, suffering due to dust over the world. And then protecting the enviroment is the most important. To be the world to task.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon [이름]! How are you? It seems that you are really concerned about the environment.

Are you also a nature lover? Talk to you tomorrow because I missed talking to you. See you!

~~May~~

Of course, both of these are important. but the important is protecting the enviroment.

>> Of course, both of these are important but protecting our environment is more important for me.

If the enviroment is destroyed, i think it can\'t do a better life.

And we can\'t increasing people\'s standard of living.

>> If the environment is destroyed, I think it can\'t contribute to a better life and people\'s standard of living won\'t be increased.

Now we are suffering from enviromental pollution. Especily, suffering due to dust over the world.

>> Now, we are suffering from environmental pollution especially from the dust.

And then protecting the enviroment is the most important. To be the world to task.

>> So protecting our environment is the most important thing to do.

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