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Hi [이름]! Future tour guide! Congratulations you made it! ^ ^

I have to say your composition is okay, you just need a little polishing with it. Explore and make use of other words just like a writer does. And of course, in this program you are applying for, you are actually trying to sell yourself. So,convince them that you can be part of their program. Try to make use of convincing and powerful words to make them believe in you but you should not also sound arrogant or boastful. ^ ^ You can tell them that your English level is intermediate to advance. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

>>Correct 

I\'m honered to apply for your program.

>>I feel so honored to apply in your program. 

When I found your program, I thought it\'s awsome.

>>When I found out about your program, I was so excited and I thought it\'s awesome! 

I\'m really good at making a conversation with strangers especially foreigners.

>>I\'m really good at initiating conversations with strangers especially to foreigners.

I\'d like to be a member of your program.

>>If you would allow me, it would be an honor to become a part and a member of your program.

Mabye you could think my speaking skill isn\'t enough.

>>Maybe you think that my speaking skill is not enough.

But I think the most important part in a conversation is an \"enjoyment\".

>>But I think being able to listen well to what the other person has to say is the most important and knowing how to respond well with a friendly tone and perkiness works well.   

I can do for travellers in that place not only companying them but also giving a fun.

>>I will not only be a companion for travelers but someone they can have fun and be friends with. 

And I saw on website that 22th members were very proud of themselves.

>>I also saw on the Website 22 of your members and were very proud of themselves. 

I\'m sure I can be like them.

>>I hope to be like them and would aspire to be the best.

I also think that member\'s relationship is important too.

>>I also believe that a members\' good attitude and establishing good relationship with others is important.

So I\'ll participate sincerely.

>>I assure you that I have a very good attitude towards work and would sincerely participate.

I hope I could join you and make a good memory with you.

>>I hope I could be a part of your program and make good memories with you!