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2018-11-14 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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Which way do you think is better when a conflict arises: taking some time and distance or solving the problem immediately? I\'m a impatient peron so I\'d like to solve thd problem immediately. In my case, if I have some times to think when a conflict arises, I feel I\'m getting upset. I don\'t know why am I getting upset but I usually was. But if someone who fight with me wants to take some time, I\'m able to wait. While the person is thinking, I\'ll be depressed though. Maybe I want to be done. I don\'t want to delay the situation which is solved at all. And also I\'m worried that the person who fight with me is disappointed during the waiting time. I have a lot of worries when I have a confict with someone. I think it\'s not a good habit. PS. I\'m disappointed that today is not a weekend. But today was cool because I get two free sandwiches!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! A Wonderful Wednesday to you! I hope it\'s a good day for you! ^ ^

People usually deal with things differently. In your case, you would like to immediately resolve the problem. The longer it takes for you to resolve it, the more upset you would be. For some, they would like to distance themselves first, or have some time out . I guess this works well for people in a relationship. They don\'t like to inflict more harm or hurt each other with words they may regret, so they give each other some time and space. But when it comes to a business setting, let\'s say in a work or office setting; the best thing to do is to resolve the problem immediately and professionally. So, if resolving the issue immediately is your preference, then I guess you are going to be a good professional business person but not quite good with relationships! ^ ^ Just kidding..! ^ ^

-Techer Jedah


I\'m a impatient peron so I\'d like to solve thd problem immediately.

>>I\'m an impatient peron so I\'d like to solve the problem immediately.

In my case, if I have some times to think when a conflict arises, I feel I\'m getting upset.

>>In my case, if I give some time to think about the conflict or disagreement, the more I would feel upset. 

I don\'t know why am I getting upset but I usually was.

>>I don\'t know why I get upset, but it\'s usually how I feel.

But if someone who fight with me wants to take some time, I\'m able to wait.

>>But if someone would have a disagreement with me and he wants to take some time, I\'m able to wait. 

While the person is thinking, I\'ll be depressed though.

>>Correct

Maybe I want to be done.

>>Maybe because I just want to be done with it. 

I don\'t want to delay the situation which is solved at all.

>>I don\'t want to delay situations that can maybe be resolved easily. 

And also I\'m worried that the person who fight with me is disappointed during the waiting time.

>>And also, I\'m worried that the person I disagreed with, would also be disappointed during the waiting time.

I have a lot of worries when I have a confict with someone.

>>Correct

I think it\'s not a good habit.

>>Correct 

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