1114 HOME WORK

2018-11-16 · 첨삭 강사 May

학생이 쓴 원문

Q. What is happiness for you? A : It is family peace which is the first happiness for me. I think all the time. The happiness is eat well and laughing and living healthy. Happiness to me is waking up with my wife. I'm very happy to have a good friend and coworker. Having a family is my greatest happiness. I will try to keep my happiness in all my life.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework. I wish for more happiness with you and your family. ^^

See you again on Monday! ^^

~~May~~

It is family peace which is the first happiness for me.

>> My family is my first happiness.
 I think all the time.

>> I think of them all the time.

The happiness is eat well and laughing and living healthy.
>> We feel happy when we eat together.
Happiness to me is waking up with my wife. 

>> Waking up every day with my wife is also my happiness.
 I\'m very happy to have a good friend and coworker.

>> Correct grammar
 Having a family is my greatest happiness.
>> Correct grammar
I will try to keep my happiness in all my life.

>> I will try to keep my happiness in my entire life.

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