1114 HOME WORK
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework. I wish for more happiness with you and your family. ^^
See you again on Monday! ^^
~~May~~
It is family peace which is the first happiness for me.
>> My family is my first happiness.
I think all the time.
>> I think of them all the time.
The happiness is eat well and laughing and living healthy.
>> We feel happy when we eat together.
Happiness to me is waking up with my wife.
>> Waking up every day with my wife is also my happiness.
I\'m very happy to have a good friend and coworker.
>> Correct grammar
Having a family is my greatest happiness.
>> Correct grammar
I will try to keep my happiness in all my life.
>> I will try to keep my happiness in my entire life.
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