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2018-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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In my opinion, divorce is not a problem that we should avoid. If people decided to divorce, they should consider enough. But if their characters didn\'t match, they need to divorce. In this case, I think fast divorce might be better than after hurt themselves. If they have their children, they want their parents\' divorce maybe. In my case, I will never get married with someone. I always think that I couldn\'t live with husband forever. I must be sick of him. Actually, I have a negative thought about mariages because it\'s not good for women. So if people decided to divorce, and thought about it a lot, they have to divorce. And I think it\'s good for their future. In children\'s case, they must be sad but they couldn\'t help it. PS. This subject was difficult for me. I have never thought about my mariage. I couldn\'t understand people who fought everyday but still live with each other. I want to recommend to them to divorce..This topic was hard for me. TT

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! An awesome day to you! Thank you for doing your homework. ^ ^ Obviously, although the topic was quite hard for you, you are in favor of divorce. You made your point here by stating that there is no use for couples to still live together if they would just fight everyday because of a lot of things. It would be the children that would suffer more. Better call it \"quits\"! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah


In my opinion, divorce is not a problem that we should avoid.

>>Correct

If people decided to divorce, they should consider enough.

>>If people have decided to get a divorce, maybe they have thought a lot about it.

But if their characters didn\'t match, they need to divorce.

>>But if their characters don\'t match, they need to divorce.

In this case, I think fast divorce might be better than after hurt themselves.

>>In this case, getting an immediate divorce is better than hurting oneself.

If they have their children, they want their parents\' divorce maybe.

>>Maybe their children would even accept that their parents should divorce. 

In my case, I will never get married with someone.

>>Correct or

>>In my case, I will never get married.

I always think that I couldn\'t live with husband forever.

>>I always think that I couldn\'t live with a husband forever. 

I must be sick of him.

>>I might get tired and be eventually sick of him.

Actually, I have a negative thought about mariages because it\'s not good for women.

>>Correct 

So if people decided to divorce, and thought about it a lot, they have to divorce.

>>So if people decide to divorce, and have thought about it a lot, then they should get a divorce. 

And I think it\'s good for their future.

>>Correct

In children\'s case, they must be sad but they couldn\'t help it.

>>With regards the children, it\'s going to be devastating for them, but they just have to learn how to accept and understand reality.

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