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Hi [이름]! I appreciate that despite your \"laziness\" ^ ^ you were able to come up with a sensible and coherent composition. ^ ^ How much more if your are focused? ^ ^

You made a very good point on this one. Violence is not always the answer to everything. Imposing to your students discipline doesn\'t mean that you have to be violent. Like what you have said, there are a lot of approaches out there that could benefit both teachers and students. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah 

I think corporal punishment is an excuse about their violence.

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>>I think corporal punishment is an excuse for them to be violent. 

It could be effective way to control students because it makes students shut their mouth.

>>It could be an effective way to control students because it makes students shut their mouths.

But I think we shouldn\'t think that corporal punishment is a way.

>>But I think we shouldn\'t consider corporal punishment as a way to discipline students .

Why we are merciful about corporal punishment even if it\'s illegal?

>>Why are we acceptable about corporal punishment even if it\'s illegal?

I saw many good teachers without punishment.

>>I saw many good teachers without physically punishing their students.

They made many conversations with their students.

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If the students couldn\'t understand, they explain for them a lot.

>>If the students couldn\'t understand, they explain to them a lot. 

They are my good memory.

>>They are my good memories.

But a teacher with corporal punishment could be a trauma for their students.

>>But teachers who use corporal punishment could instill trauma to their students. 

In Korea, all teachers can\'t punish students because of student rights.

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So sometimes some students beat up their teacher.

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So I think we need to find some neutral way.

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