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2021-11-19 · 첨삭 강사 Ivy

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The project will study how states’ policies or laws can obligate states and investors to do address climate-change concerns. The direct or indirect effect (regulatory chill, which means states’ will not introduce new policies for public interest because of concerns on investment disputes) of investment disputes on climate policies will be analysed. -Different types of IIAs will be analysed to find out its limitation to discern the challenges and opportunities they can pose for climate-change policy in general. Since IIAs are interpreted by arbitral tribunals, IIAs and investment cases should be analysed together. This project will review IIAs that caused the climate-related investment disputes, also the representative and significant IIAs in Asia. -Given that the Asia countries’ energy consumption increases due to economic development and implementation of strenghthened climate measures due to international pressure, the hypothesis is not unfeasible.

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The project will study how states’ policies or laws can obligate states and investors to do address climate-change concerns.

>> The project will study how states’ policies or laws can obligate states and investors to address climate-change concerns.
The direct or indirect effect (regulatory chill, which means states’ will not introduce new policies for public interest because of concerns on investment disputes) of investment disputes on climate policies will be analysed.

>> The direct or indirect effect of investment disputes on climate policies will be analysed.
-Different types of IIAs will be analysed to find out its limitation to discern the challenges and opportunities they can pose for climate-change policy in general.

>> Different types of IIAs will be analysed to find the limit and discern the challenges and opportunities they can pose for climate-change policy in general.

Since IIAs are interpreted by arbitral tribunals, IIAs and investment cases should be analysed together.

>> Correct

This project will review IIAs that caused the climate-related investment disputes, also the representative and significant IIAs in Asia.

>> This project will review IIAs that caused the climate-related investment disputes, and the representative and significant IIAs in Asia.
-Given that the Asia countries’ energy consumption increases due to economic development and implementation of strenghthened climate measures due to international pressure, the hypothesis is not unfeasible.

>> Given that Asian countries’ energy consumption increases due to economic development and implementation of strengthened climate measures due to international pressure, the hypothesis is feasible.

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