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Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework, I appreciate it! ^ ^ Wonderful thoughts on this one. I like what you have said, if healthier foods are a lot cheaper than junk foods then it would do a lot of good not only to some but to everyone! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

It\'s a hard question for me because I have never thought about this topic.

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I think the government should not place a tax on bad foods.

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>>I think the government should not impose taxes on considered unhealthy foods. 

According to The Science Times, an article, many nations place an obesity tax on bad foods.

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They think it can decrease obesity ratio.

>>They think that it can decrease the rate of obesity. 

But most of junk foods and fatty snacks are cheaper than healthy foods.

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I\'m worried that poor people can\'t eat anything although junk foods are not healthy.

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For example, an instant noodle is a most cheapest food of meal which we think.

>>For example, instant noodles are the cheapest kind of meal that we can think of. 

If it is not reasonable, many poor people must worry about their lives.

>>If the price is not reasonable, many poor people will worry about their lives.

It could be harsh for them.

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Instead, if some healthy foods are cheaper than now, I agree that placing an tax on junk food and fatty snacks.

>>Instead, if some healthy foods are cheaper than now, I would  agree on placing taxes on junk foods and fatty snacks. 

In Korea, 30 percent of people is obesity.

>>In Korea, 30 percent of the population is obese.

For sure, it\'s less than western countries.

>>For sure, it\'s a lot less compared to western countries.

But I think we need to consider this problem.

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