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Hi [이름]! Thanks for sharing this to me. I know that high school in Korea is very crucial.
So the students really study hard to pass the \"SuNeung\" test. I wish for your more success in
your company. ^^
~~May~~
Was it harder to study in college than in high school?
=>I majored in math in College, and results in less than 10 percent University for four years.
>> I majored in math in College, and results IS less than 10 percent IN THE University for four years.
If i had not been study hard, i didn\'t work on the company KT&G
>> If I had not studied hard, I wouldn\'t have worked in the KT&G company.
How does college compare to high school?
=> My country is compulsory eaducation until high school.
>> Basic education in my country is compulsory.
They do not job even if you graduated the College.
>> They do not have a job even if they graduated in college.
The purpose of entering university is only a means of a job to do.
>> The purpose of entering university is just to get a job in the future.
What advice would you give a high school student who is about to go to college?
=> Don\'t give up the challenge!
>> CORRECT
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