[1122]Home work

2018-11-23 · 첨삭 강사 May

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HOMEWORK: Answer the questions. Was it harder to study in college than in high school? =>I majored in math in College, and results in less than 10 percent University for four years. If i had not been study hard, i didn't work on the company KT&G How does college compare to high school? => My country is compulsory eaducation until high school. They do not job even if you graduated the College. The purpose of entering university is only a means of a job to do. What advice would you give a high school student who is about to go to college? => Don't give up the challenge!

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Hi [이름]! Thanks for sharing this to me. I know that high school in Korea is very crucial.

So the students really study hard to pass the \"SuNeung\" test. I wish for your more success in

your company. ^^

~~May~~

Was it harder to study in college than in high school?
=>I majored in math in College, and results in less than 10 percent University for four years.

>> I majored in math in College, and results IS less than 10 percent IN THE University for four years.
 If i had not been study hard, i didn\'t work on the company KT&G

>> If I had not studied hard, I wouldn\'t have worked in the KT&G company. 
 How does college compare to high school?
=> My country is compulsory eaducation until high school.

>> Basic education in my country is compulsory.
 They do not job even if you graduated the College.

>> They do not have a job even if they graduated in college.
 The purpose of entering university is only a means of a job to do.
>> 
 The purpose of entering university is just to get a job in the future.

What advice would you give a high school student who is about to go to college?
=> Don\'t give up the challenge!

>> CORRECT

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