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학생이 쓴 원문
Answer the question briefly.
Is voting an important responsibility of a citizen? Why or why not?
(Answer)i think that it is an reaponsibility of a citizens.
Voting is very important because it slects a person to work for the citizens of country.
Voting decide to rise and fall of the country.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Good morning to you again! I am sorry. I didn\'t understand your last sentence.
But your answer is good. We give importance to democracy. ^^
~~May~~
i think that it is an reaponsibility of a citizens.
>> I think that it is the responsibility of citizens.
Voting is very important because it slects a person to work for the citizens of country.
>> Voting is very important because it helps us to choose the best leader for the country.
Voting decide to rise and fall of the country.
>>(I don\'t understand this sentence [이름]. I\'m sorry!)
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