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Wow Ye[이름]! I always knew that you are a brilliant student! Keep it up! - Teacher Ivy
During my teaching career, I have met many foreign students.
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They are usually under a lot of pressure because of the competition between Chinese students and the language barrier.
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Ye[이름] had the same issue at the beginning of the LLM at Tsinghua University.
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Nonetheless, she overcomes such difficulties by studying her major as well as the Chinese language very hard.
>> Nonetheless, she overcame such difficulties by studying her major as well as the Chinese language very hard.
>> or, Nonetheless, she was able to overcome such difficulties by studying her major as well as the Chinese language very hard.
Her exceptional academic performance proves her efforts.
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She entered our school in 2019.
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The total number of LLM students at Tsinghua University in 2019 was 249, of which her academic achievement was outstanding, ranked in the top 3%.
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Our school only accepts few exceptional foreign students, of the total 249 students, there were only four foreign students in 2019.
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With her countless efforts, she was able to receive a 3.79/4.0, the best GPA among foreign students.
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Even though it usually takes 3 years for foreign students to finish LLM at our university, she finished it in two years.
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