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Hi [이름]! A Terrific Tuesday to you! I hope you start it right and end it awesome! ^ ^ I appreciate you taking time in doing your homework. Don\'t worry about the previous ones, you know what they say; \"better late than never\". At least I know you are exerting your effort in doing them. It\'s a good practice to hone your skill. ^ ^
We have the same thing in mind, these robots can cure diseases. I never thought of it as being used in a negative way though! Nice thoughts! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I think it would be useful in surgeries.
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The important thing in suegeries is a sophisticated handling.
>>The important thing in surgeries is sophisticated handling.
>>The important thing in surgeries is careful handling.
If we could use molecule-sized robots, it could do anything we couldn\'t do like eliminating cancers.
>>If we could use molecule-sized robots, it could do anything we couldn\'t do like eliminating cancer cells.
Perhaps, we can solve an issue about eternal life through the robots!
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BecauseI I thought aging is a problem about molecules.
>>Because I thought aging is a problem about molecules. (correct sentence, typo error)
Or, it could be bad robots if these are used by stalkers.
>>Or they could turn into bad robots if acquired and used by corrupt and destructive people.
Police may not catch them quickly because it\'s too tiny.
>>Police may not catch them quickly because they are too tiny.
Maybe it could be used by military.
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If they use the robots in a war, it could be a disaster.
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If someone invents molecule-sized robots, the government must regulate the robots.
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>>If someone invents molecule-sized robots, the government must regulate the issuance and use of these robots.
I think if someone buys a molecule-sized robot, our government must have their ID information.
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>>I think if someone buys a molecule-sized robot, our government must have their complete and thorough information.
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