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Hi [이름]! Wonderful of you to catch up with your homework! Good girl! ^ ^ Great powers come great responsibilities! This is according to Spiderman! ^ ^ It is really interesting to imagine having superpowers; mind control, shape shifting, invisibility! I wish I could have one too! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I\'d like to have a flying or teleport ability.
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Because I take many times in buses.
>>Because I ride a bus a lot of times.
My school was far from my home so I should take two buses and one subway.
>>My school is far from my home, so I take two bus rides and a subway ride.
If I could fly, I can save my time. But I think flyinf is an exercise too.
>>If I could fly, I can save my time, and I think, flying is an exercise too.
And If I have a flying ability, I should hide my ability so I\'ll have to fly high.
>>If I have a flying ability, I must hide my ability so I need to fly high.
But you know, the more higher, the more cooler.
>>But, the higher I fly, the colder it gets.
So if I have to choose one, I\'ll choose teleport ability.
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I don\'t need to reserve a plane ticket and I don\'t need to prepare for my plan in advance, either!
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I love seeing the view over the train\'s window but I want that it is a option.
>>I love seeing the view outside my train\'s window but I want that as an option.
If I\'m busy, I could teleport to everywhere!
>>If I\'m busy with a lot of things, I could teleport everywhere.
But maybe some people bother me because I have a superpower.
>>But maybe, if people would find out about my superpowers, they would bother me.
So I\'ll hide my ability even for my close friends!
>>So I\'ll hide my ability even to my close friends!
And I\'ll travel around the world.
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I don\'t need to work in bakery anymore, so I\'ll quit the job.
>>I don\'t need to work in a bakery anymore, so I\'ll quit the job.
Or I can earn money through my ability.
>>Correct
I hope I\'ll get some superpowers.^^
>>I wish I have superpowers.^ ^
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