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Hi [이름]! I appreciate you taking the time in doing your homework! ^ ^ Thank you for sharing your interest in writing a mystery-thriller book. Stranger Things by the way is not a drama series, but  a science-fiction TV series. ^ ^ I have watched this too! All Seasons and Episodes! It\'s for kids but it sparked my interest especially about monsters, aliens and \"strange things\".

-Teacher Jedah  ^ ^

I\'m not good at writing but if I could, it would be a mystery.

>>Correct 

Because I\'m watching a drama, Stranger Things, it was awesome!

>>Because I\'m watching this drama, Stranger Things, it is awesome! 

It was so thrilling and funny.

>>It is thrilling and funny. (I\'m assuming that you are watching it everyday or up to the present, so we stick with the present tense) 

And I\'m interested in mysterious stories like about ghosts.

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I\'ve seen ghosts before(I\'m not sure real it is)so I think I can write a novel based on my experience.

>>I\'ve seen ghosts before (I\'m not sure if it was real) so I think I can write a novel based on my experience. 

Before I moved for now home, at the previous home, I saw a strange light in front of a TV.

>>Before I moved to a new home, I saw a strange light in front of the TV in the former house I lived.

I didn\'t know but surprisingly my brother saw it too!

>>I didn\'t know what it was, but surprisingly my brother saw it too!

If I add some fictional stories, it would be a good novel.

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But I\'d like to write a real story.

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Because I think it could stimulate people\'s fear more!

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So I\'ll ask to some people who have some experience which is about ghosts.

>>So I\'ll try to know from people who had some experiences with ghosts. 

But it can be too obvious so I need to practice writing.

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I hope I can be like J.K.Rowlling who wrote Herry Poter

>>I hope I can be like J.K. Rowling who wrote Harry Potter (correct sentence, misspelled J.K. Rowling and Harry Potter)