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What I am eager to achieve from this program is to complete a high-quality thesis as a stepping stone for my research career in the field of international investment law and climate change.
>> The reason why I’m eager to achieve from this program is to complete a high-quality thesis as a stepping stone for my research career in the field of international investment law and climate change.
I have never done an in-depth study on international investment law, but I have learned the importance of the law in relation to climate change and the impacts of the investor-States Disputes (ISD) on States’ climate-change-mitigation goals, during my master course.
>> I have never done an in-depth study on international investment law, but I have learned the importance of law in relation to climate change and the impacts of the investor-States Disputes (ISD) on States’ climate-change-mitigation goals, during my master course.
One of my future aspirations with the knowledge gained from this program is to become a researcher at climate-related international organizations, especially that have entered Korea such as the Green Climate Fund (GCF), Global Green Growth Institute (GGGI).
>> One of my future aspirations with the knowledge gained from this program is to become a researcher at climate-related international organizations, especially that have entered Korea, such as the Green Climate Fund (GCF), Global Green Growth Institute (GGGI).
I would like to do in-depth research on how international investment law can contribute to mitigating climate change and how to resolve climate-related ISDs.
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