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Hi [이름]! I think that you are really a happy person.
Your family is your happiness. You are just lucky that you
have a beautiful family and a nice job. ^^
~~May~~
I always wonder what the standard of happiness is.
I still couldn\'t find the answer.
My friends are happy, but i also try to live happily.
>> Correct
I have 2 happiness more than my friends.
>> But I think I happier than my friends.
The first thing is that i got married faster than them, and my children grew up.
>> First, I got married earlier than them and my children have already grown up.
And secondly, i got a job the fastest. They are always envy me.
>> And secondly, I got my job easily. They always envy me.
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