113. Homework

In my case, If I could turn back time, I\'d rather have a sibling TT

Now, I am getting older alone, although I relish everything by myself, I also have to bear the burden by myself as well TT

See you on Monday, Jason!

ESSAY: Is it better to grow up with siblings or grow up alone?
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I my opinion it is better to grow up with siblings than grow up alone.

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 There are the reasons as below.
>>The reasons are stated below.
First, children might learn with their siblings regarding how to handle or divide with limited materials such as foods, toys, clothes, or something that they need to use for a living.

>>First, children might learn how to handle or divide limited materials such as food, toys, clothes, or something that they need to use for a living with their siblings.

 What if their parents are too much rich, then it is not a problem anymore, however, most of them are not.

>>What if their parents are too rich, then it is not a problem anymore; however, most of them are not.

So, children and their parents will meet the same circumstances that I mentioned before.
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Second, actually, I don’t have any idea for the question since I just have only one opinion.

>>Second, actually, I don’t have any idea for the question since I just only have one opinion.

thus, I searched the internet for answering about it.

>>Thus, I searched the internet to answer it.

 Most of mam on the blogs, suggest her who has been considering about another child and posted her concern on the web site give a birth a sibling for the first baby.

>> Most mothers on the blog advised a woman who posted her concern about having another child after giving birth to her first baby.

 It’s because while the child grows up alone, he or she would feel lonely.

>> It’s because as the child grows up alone, she feels lonely.

And, they said, mam and daddy were not able to support and help to the child perfectly, at that time, their siblings would help them each other and they might be reliance on each other when they become an adult.
>>And, they said, the mom and the dad were not able to support and help to the child perfectly, at that time, their siblings would help and they rely on one another when they become adults.
On the other hand, a person who doesn’t recommend her another replied on her opinion.

>>On the other hand, a person who has an opposite opinion responded.

She said while she had been growing along, she felt lonely because she was the only one child of their family.

>>She said while she was growing up, she felt lonely because she was the only one child of their family.

So, she was eager to have another siblings but she couldn’t.

>>So, she was eager to have another sibling, but she couldn’t.

Anyways, just now, she is happy since she will not meet any problems about division of heritage and will not argue with her siblings regarding for bringing up their parents.

>>Anyways, just now, she is happy since she will not meet any problem about division of inheritance and will not argue with her siblings about how their parents brought them up.

It\'s because she doesn’t have any brothers and sisters so all the things which are properties and duties will be given only for her.
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In conclusion, I just more agree with the growing up with siblings are better if they will make a child.

>>In conclusion, I just agree on growing up with siblings if parents have children.

Since they will get some benefits from the regulation under government.

>>OR: In conclusion, I just agree on growing up with siblings if parents have children, since they will get some benefits from the government.

That’s because of the following decreasing birthrate, Korean government gives parents a lot of benefits and if they have more children, they will get more advantages.

>>Due to the decreasing birthrate, Korean government gives parents a lot of benefits and if they have more children, thus giving them more advantages.

But, I’m not sure about it since I am not interested in growing up babies even one, so I can’t mention about benefits in detail.

>>However, I’m not sure about it since I am not interested in raising even one baby, so I can’t mention the benefits in detail.