1130 homework

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You gave wonderful thoughts on this one. Just because a person is older doesn\'t mean he/she gets the promotion. There are a lot of things to consider. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

I think performance evaluation is the basis of workplace promotion.

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Ability to do business is the most important part in promotion.

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Competent employees can improve their company\'s benefits.

>>Competent employees can improve their company and would benefit from them greatly.

I think the other elements are not important.

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Some people would think seniority is important but I think it\'s not a good idea.

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If seniority is the basis of promotion, the company must be worse.

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Because competent employees could be disappointed and they may want to change their job.

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It\'s very big lost of their company.

>>It\'s a very big lost in the company\'s part. 

And degree is a important factor of a promotion.

>>And a persons\' degree is an important factor for promotion. 

But I think the people who don\'t have a relative degree can do better through their effort.

>>But I think employees who don\'t have a relative degree can be given promotion too through their efforts.

So I believe we don\'t judge people through their degree.

>>So I believe we shouldn\'t judge people through their degrees.

Of course, it would be difficult.

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