115. Homework

I definitely believe that a good appearance is not everything, but I insist that it has a significant contribution.

People naturally gravitate towards others who look pleasing, don\'t we?

Have a great Wednesday, see you Jason^^

ESSAY: Do you think physical appearance affects a person\'s performance? Why or why not?
>>CORRECT!
I know the old and famous sentence and it related with the questions as below.

>>I know an old and famous saying, and it is related with the questions below.
 I just give you another chance because you are pretty.

>> I\'d just give you another chance because you are pretty.
 And most of the times it’s true.

>>And most of the time, it’s true.

Furthermore, it applies not only women but also men.
>>Furthermore, it applies not only to women but also men.
Besides, they who have hansom or pretty looks will get an advantage while they have interview to get a job.

>>Besides, they who have a handsome or pretty looks will get an advantage when they have an interview to get a job.

During that time, I think their abilities such as what they can do well and what they learned in the school are important.

>>CORRECT!

However, what if a job seeker A are looks nicer than job seeker B when they have same abilities on their resume and interviews, interviewer will choose interviewee A.
>>However, what if jobseeker A looks nicer than jobseeker B?

>>When they have the same abilities in their resume and interviews, the interviewer will choose interviewee A.
Moreover, for example, if a person A who is a quite character and looks not handsome keeps quite while he does blind date, a woman thinks he is boring guy so she doesn’t like him although he has good manner.

>>Moreover, for example, if person A who has a quiet character and does not look handsome keeps quiet while he is on a blind date, the woman will think he is a boring guy, so she doesn’t like him although he has good manners.

On the other hand, a person B who is a silent personality same as A person keeps quiet while he does blind date, a woman thinks he looks chic and cool so she likes him even if he doesn’t have a good etiquette.
>>On the other hand, if person B who is also silent but handsome keeps quiet during a blind date, a woman can think he looks chic and cool, so she likes him even if he doesn’t have good etiquette.
And then, I saw a story on Facebook, nowadays women prefer to have a relationship with a guy who is good appearance.

>>And then, I saw a story on Facebook, nowadays women prefer to have a relationship with a guy who has a good appearance.

 It’s because they feel happy when they see him although they got angry.

>> It’s because they feel happy when they see him although they get angry.

Thus, they would like to forgive him.

>>CORRECT!

I think it’s a kind of same effect when someone feel comfortable when he sees flower, animals, pictures, or good views something like that.
>>I think it’s a kind of similar effect when someone feels comfortable when he sees flowers animals, pictures, or good views something like that.
However, some people feel uncomfortable when they seat together with a person who has good looks because they thought they will be compared with their nice appearance.

>>However, some people feel uncomfortable when they sit together with a person who has good looks, because they thought they will be compared with their nice appearance.

 Hence, they avoid to them.
>> Hence, they avoid them.
Anyways, in my views, most people prefer to see an adorable appearance.

>>Anyways, in my view, most people prefer to see an adorable appearance.
I think that the reason why physical appearance affects a person’s performance since the others treat them better if they have good appearance.

>>I think the reason why physical appearance affects a person’s performance is that the others treat them better if they have a good appearance.