119. Homework

Parents play a crucial role in child development, so I hope they could guide their children effectively.

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ESSAY: Is child behavior better or worse than it was years ago?
>>CORRECT!
I don’t know how to compare the child behavior between old generation and nowadays.

>>I don’t know how to compare the old generation and present child behavior.

I guess there were the same problems, which people couldn’t approach it easily since issues were hard to be gathered by reporters and it was spread only newspapers, existed in the past time.

>>I guess there were the same problems, which people couldn’t approach easily since issues were hard to be gathered by reporters and it was spread only newspapers, which existed in the past time.
 However, in my opinion, the types of criminals have been developed a lot than before.

>> CORRECT!
 Nowadays, I can hear many issues made by students such as riot which was made in their class, violation to their classmate, selling their classmate like prostitution and something like that on the internet.

>> Nowadays, I can hear many issues made by students such as riot which was made in their class, violation towards their classmate, selling their classmate like prostitution and something like that on the internet.

It’s because they are so clever and they learn all about things including bad actions owing to the internet development.

>>It’s because they are so clever and they learn all things including bad actions owing to the internet development.

Furthermore, the regulation for the children had been changed good for them since many people believe in possibilities which they could change student’s life to be good way.

>>Furthermore, the regulation for the children had been changed to be good for them since many people believe in possibilities which they could change student’s life in a good way.

However, unfortunately, few students and their parents use it to bad way.

>>However, unfortunately, few students and their parents use it negatively.

So, they already know they wouldn’t get any punishment in law even if they made serious problem.

>>So, they already know they wouldn’t get any punishment in law even if they made a serious problem.

Moreover, unluckily, they also knew they would be protected by a lawyer if their parents were rich although they made terrible criminals.

>>Moreover, unluckily, they also knew they would be protected by a lawyer if their parents were rich although they were made into terrible criminals.

So, the regulation and mind of the parents should be changed for the giving a good circumstance to the next generations.

>>So, the regulation and mind of the parents should be changed to give a good circumstance to the next generations.

 It’s because the bad phenomenon may be going to be worse

>> It’s because the bad phenomenon may get worse.