11oct2024_homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Writing task: Who has taught you a lot in your life?
Maybe recently when I has experience a depression my doctor gave a guideline of life to me.
I think her story helped me because she taught me things about myself that I didn\'t know I had.
Thanks to her, I have read a lot of books and I think they are taught my life.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! I\'m so glad you are caring for yourself and have found very good people around you, like your doctor. Thank you for sharing!
-T. Sonny
Maybe recently when I has experience a depression my doctor gave a guideline of life to me.>>Maybe, because recently I have been experiencing depression, it is my doctor who has been guiding me in life nowadays.
I think her story helped me because she taught me things about myself that I didn\'t know I had.
I think her story helped me because she taught me things about myself that I didn\'t know I had.
>>I think, her story has helped me because she taught me things about myself I didn\'t know I had.
Thanks to her, I have read a lot of books and I think they are taught my life.
Thanks to her, I have read a lot of books and I think they are taught my life.
>>Thanks to her, I also have read many books which taught me a lot in life.
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